My poem - Value Of Love goes Open source
Personal, Blogging June 21st, 2007
This is a poem i wrote back in 2004, in a moment of deep sadness and i am open sourcing it now.
I know..it’s weird. A open source poem? Well, kind of…Why not?
It’s not a perfect written poem, as i am not one of the people with high writing skills, but the poem means a lot to me.
Why am I doing that? No reason. I am just doing it.
Change it and use it as you will (not on commercial purposes), but please, be kind and link back to this post so i can track the changes you’ve made.
Every person has a very sensitive side.
Value of Love - By Carol
My heart is breaking ,
My tears are so bitter,
My lips are dry from missing kisses,
My eyes are hurting from not seeing,
My arms are empty from not holding,
My heart is crying and is pounding for …love
And whispers to my ear.The angry cloud inside my heart,
Is ready to burst out the rain of tears,
Distance and time, the truth and lie..
Don’t matter now…..
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There is no yesterday.. the present is just illusion.
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If there was something, and i held too light or tight on it,
Then it’s a shame that now is gone.
How do we know, if we don’t learn?I am hiding now my tears.
Your name is causing loneliness and sadness
The pain is greater than before,
The pain is reaching to all my senses.But true love, never dies.
You’ll see it over all the years who will come
And you will recognize it,
When you’ll look me in the eyes.Remember and bear in your soul and mind,
True love is not to find but gain.
True love will be the two hearts golden chain.
So bear that in your mind!
Don’t break the chain because you’ll break a heart.I know i hurt you…I know i love you,
And you must know how much i care for you.
I’ve made mistakes and you did too..
Despite of all that happened,
I only value you.
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This poem is lincensed under:
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 2.0 Belgium License
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A poem written from the heart,it was a brave decision to post it.
Getting to your heart, David?
When i wrote this, my boyfriend was next to me and asked me why i wrote it and for whom, because it was surely not intended for him…long story short, he admitted it though that he really loved it and asked me to send it somewhere to be published, along with the others.
I didn’t think is worth that much except feelings, and i still think is not, but i have a chance to release it now for others to see.
Carol,it really is a good poem and i’m not just saying that because you are my friend.
If you’re serious about open sourcing it, put in under a Creative Commons license.
David, i know you’re alway honest to me. I very much appreciate that.
Bahu, that’s a good idea. Thank you. I will look right now into it.